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: the (new) legal writerTwo things wrong with this headline
New Orleans CityBusiness features this headline: N.O. area shed 1,800 jobs over the year. I see two things wrong with this headline.
- The subject, ?area,? is singular, and should therefore take a singular verb. (The story talks about jobs being lost now. So the verb?s tense is presumably present, not past.)
- More importantly, the verb should not be ?shed.? That word implies that the 1,800 jobs were unnecessary or superfluous, which insults the 1,800 who lost their jobs. ?Loses? would be a more appropriate (and a grammatically correct) verb.
Full post as published by the (new) legal writer on October 24, 2009 (boomark / email).
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